[Nhờ giúp đỡ] bài tập tiếng Anh

Đi đánh ghen bị núi đè bỏ chạy, tụi bạn nc ngoài nó search ra thì quê lắm.

Long Quân thì bá đạo hơn nhưng thấy đa phần dùng phép hóa rồng, chưa thấy mô tả thủy chiến .
Nhưng chắc chắn hơn khoản trăm trứng rồi, mình nói chuyện đám ở công ty nhưng đang phân vân nên gọi ổng là gì:

The King of Ocean.
The Dragon-man of Ocean.
The God of Ocean.

Vì so ra vai vế Long Quân không cao đến mức đó, nói King với God nghe hơi quá :(

 

Vừa google ra tên Dragon Lord.

 

Nhưng thế hơi tham lam vì Long Quân là long nhân , móa truyền thuyết người ta viết hay mà truyền thuyết long quân chưa đến nửa trang giấy, éo biết translate thế méo nào.

Ví dụ như so sánh bằng thì dùng các từ nào
As
Like
Same

Ví dụ nói câu Aquaman giống một nhân vật trong truyền thuyết Việt Nam, tên ông ta là Long quân, nghĩa là Dragon Lord (cho nó sang)

Rồi compare hai người.

 

Long Quân thì nghĩa đen đúng là Dragon Lord rồi chứ gì nữa

Aquaman shares many similarities ( nhiều người dùng thế này, nhưng bản thân mình không thích lắm, mặc dù đọc nghe hay hơn nhưng đã share rồi còn similarities cảm thấy hơi thừa thài) with a famous Vietnamese legend, Lạc Long Quân. His name literally means the Dragon Lord of Lạc, an ancient tribe that is ancestor of Vietnamese.

từ so sánh cho trường hợp này thì: comparable, equal, can be related, akin, analogous, a like, very much a like, share many similarities, the same. just as, similarly, in the same way.

 

Dịch thoáng ra cũng được. Truyền thuyết là con rồng cháu tiên, tức là rồng và tiên ngang nhau. Có thể dịch là Descendants of Fairy and Dragon.

Long Quân = Dragon God
Âu Cơ = Fairy Queen

Nói chung không cần phải đúng từng chữ, chỉ cần hợp ngữ cảnh là ok

 

Dragon God nghe phê hơn, kể cho thằng bạn nghe xong nó nói chắc Long quân với aquaman có liên hệ

 

Long Lão Tổ là một dạng Old God ấy chứ, phải gọi là The first man, King of dragon and seven seas, Lord of "Kinh" race.

 

Điền từ nào cho đúng đây anh em?

______the dream must have been a warning, I decided to change my behaviour.
a. Sine
b. Although
c. In spite of
d. Being as how

Ngoài ra mình còn bị vướn vào lỗi dùng câu đơn quá nhiều là lại không biết cách chuyển tiếp sao chủ đề khác. Ví dụ các bạn có thể translate đoạn văn sau sao cho mượt. (Dòng in đậm là điểm yếu của mình)

Khi bạn sống ở một đô thị lớn thì ngoài sống trong một căn nhà riêng (single house), bạn còn có thể thêm sự lựa chọn khác là ở những căn hộ chung cư (Condo) .
Trong căn nhà riêng của mình thì bạn có thể làm mọi thứ mình thích với nó như trang trí, sửa chữa cấu trúc bên trong, điều mà căn hộ chung cư không thể làm được. Nói như thếkhông có nghĩa căn hộ chung cư thì không tiện nghi và thoải mái như căn nhà riêng.

 

1. Since

2. When you live in a big city, besides owning a single house, your other choice could be a condos apartment. You could do anything you like in your house from decorating to renovating, which you cannot do in condo apartment without the landlord approval. That said, it does not mean living in condo apartment is any less convenient than owning a house

 

Thump. Facing down on the floor was not my preferred way to start a new day. The crackling of firewood muffled in the drumming rain made me realize that this was neither morning nor my bedroom. Pushing myself up, my hand laid partly on the wooden floor and partly on this softness of the cotton throw. The years on that dreadful twin bed in college should advance my balance skills much better than this. I must have been exhausted and dozed off on the couch. Right, Bob asked for a report with only 2-hour notice knowing how I loathe writing. I could not for the life of me just simply refuse. Either that or a 9 to 5. Else, I would just burn out sooner or later. “Hmm, what am I doing actually?” The thought occurred as I wondered toward the light from the kitchen. There were some carrot, onion and beef neatly prepared and a pot was boiling on the stove. “Beef stew? Most definitely!”

“Ding-dong” the doorbell chimed. “Just a sec.” I hurriedly dumped the last piece or carrot into the pot and dried my hands while heading to the front door. “Hi” “Hey there!” “Wh-How are you?” For some reason, I stuttered as if I didn’t even recognize my girlfriend. “How long are you planning to stand there? It’s pouring outside!” “Sorry! Sorry! Come on in.” I had been dating Liv for just shy of 3 years. We first met at my welcoming party to the states. I didn’t know much English back then and she barely understood Vietnamese. But here we were, planning our 3rd anniversary. I urged Liv to the living room and grabbed her a tower. “Thanks, that’s nice of you.” “Sure thing, let me check the kitchen real quick. I’ll be right back.” “K, be quick tho. Gotta leave in a few.” The stew seemed to go without a hitch, savory with a hint of spicy. I needed something light to go with it. A salad would suffice. As I was chopping up some greens laying around in the fridge, I heard soft footsteps coming toward the kitchen.

“Hey, Prof. Miller wanted to give you this. I told him I’ll take it since I’m heading to your place.” Liv handed me a piece of paper. I could only skim through it before she asked. “Also, didn’t you want to talk to me?”

“What’s that? Oh right, what do you want to do for the coming anniversary?”

“Anniversary? What’s this? Don’t tell me this is another scheme of yours”

“I don’t get it, isn’t this Friday the 21st? Our first date, don’t you remember?”

“Are you out of your mind?” She screamed. “We broke up last year. On this very day. You told me that you couldn’t stand me anymore, that I’m annoying and that I’m always angry and that I’m always making a big deal out of everything. DON’T YOU REMEMBER?

It all came flooding back. I was living in hell this past year. I buried myself with work to forget her but the more I tried the worse it got. I could not take a step in the bedroom without seeing her. I could not touch a thing in the house without sparking memories of us. All of it, the good and bad. I could vividly see her face blooming of smile and the next moment, inflamed with rage. I could see us loving, see us caring, see us tearing ourselves apart. I was living every moment as if it was real. Did I conjure a life with Liv although it would only bring sorrow and misery? I couldn’t, could I?

“Are you even listening to me?” Liv asked angrily.

“Hey, hey, snap out of it”

“Hey, wake up”

“WAKE UP”

“WAKE UP”

“WAKE UP”

Another thump. Everything was suddenly quiet. There was no more screaming, no more shouting and most of all, no more memories. No words could ever describe how I felt. Everything was so calm. Total tranquility. My senses gradually started to come back. Something was dropping at my feet, something sluggish, something reddish. I still hold the salad knife in my hand, covered in red and Liv was laying on the floor, peacefully. Next to her was a piece of paper drenched in blood. It could barely read: “The following paragraph begins a myster…”

 

Mình có một vài thắc mắc về đoạn văn giới thiệu nhiều người một lúc trong tiếng Anh. Ví dụ như đoạn văn tiếng Việt như sau:

Có tất cả ba đối tượng tình nghi: Lan, cô gái bán hàng rong; Tuấn, kẻ thường xuyên say xỉn và quậy phá; Lưu, anh sinh viên hiền lành và ít nói.

Thứ nhất là dấu 2 chấm có hay dùng hoặc không nên dùng không?
Thứ hai là một đoạn văn giới thiệu người trong phần tổng kết nên tách ba câu đơn hay có thể dồn vào một câu vì chữ and sẽ lặp lại khá nhiều dù tách bằng dấu ";"

 

Cấu trúc của câu nhiều ý bao giờ cũng là: A, B, C, and D

Ví dụ:
There are 3 suspects: Lan the street vendor, Tuan the drunkard and Luu the quiet student

 

Không cần to be luôn hả anh

 

Văn viết tránh dùng "Nowadays" nhé, đó là từ không trang trọng chỉ phù hợp với văn nói. Thay bằng "Today" vừa đơn giản vừa chính xác.

 

Có "there are" đấy còn gì

 

Đang vật lộn với bài essay .
Đề:
The following 3 are possible essay topics. Your essay must be 5 paragraphs, of about 300 to 350 words. Please take your time to give me a well thought out introductory paragraph, body paragraphs which contain good information, advanced vocabulary and sentence variety, and a well organized concluding paragraph. Please proof read it, making sure your verb tense follows the correct format.

1. If your house were on fire, what objects would you want to save?
2. If you had a time machine, what changes would you make in your life?
3. If you could be a superhero, which one would you be? Explain.

 

300-350 chữ dài lắm ....

Viết essay kiểu này thì cấu trúc bài giống nhau thôi:

1. Mở bài, giới thiệu về chủ đề
2. Thân bài đoạn 1, phát triển chủ đề, nêu ý kiến chủ quan
3. Thân bài đoạn 2, phát triển chủ đề, củng cố ý kiến chủ quan
4. Thân bài đoạn 3, nêu ý kiến phản biện, rồi phản biện ý kiến đó để tiếp tục củng cố ý kiến chủ quan
5. Kết bài, tóm lại ý kiến, đúc kết kinh nghiệm

Ngay cả IELTS cũng chỉ cần 250 chữ thôi ....

 

Nó là final ra trường luôn thầy ơi

 

Khai bút đầu năm vậy, chọn chủ đề 2 cho dễ chém nhé

Time travel is one of the biggest dreams of mankind. It is understandable as most human alive bear some regrets in their lives. "I could have done that better", "I could have bought that thing", or "I could have listened to mom" are some thoughts that go through our minds at one point or another, and I am not an exception. If we can do time travel or if we have a time machine, could we change our lives for the better?

Some people want to go back in time and buy that winning lottery ticket. Some people want to correct their wrong decisions. Some extremists might want to change world history by killing Hitler before he performed the genocide for example. As for myself, I just want to go back and tell my younger self to stop wasting time on pointless things. All those nights long gaming could have been used to study, train or sleep. All those wasted money on toys that I never played could be used to buy books or tools. And all those time I hurt the feelings of people around me could have been avoided, and I believe that would change my life for the better.

On the other hand, there is a belief that changing even a small thing in your past may drastically alter the course of history and greatly change the future, also known as "The butterfly effect". But it is to my belief that time is a stream of water that flows like a river. We human could make a small ripple in the flow of time, but cannot change the flow itself. Taking the example of killing Hitler mentioned above, it surely can prevent Hitler to do the killing, but there will be another person rise up and take the place in the flow of history.

Thus I do not intend to change drastic things in my life, I only want to make small adjustments. Since I believe that even though my life is not perfect, it is those mistakes that define who I am today. So instead of trying to correct the past, I will try to change my future, which does not happen yet, and is still full of choices and possibilities to make. After all, since we cannot actually time travel, it is better to just look into the past to shape the future

 

Đầu năm cảm ơn thầy nhé.