Silent tears of the poet

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Hmmm...:p...Sweet topic!
Well,but I fear that I can't make any good poem,so I just try once:pAnd yes,I just think this is what we call "Thơ con cóc"^^

For my lover
You've cried,you've been hurt
Crying painfully-It must...
You pretend you were having fun....
But your eyes have told me the truth...

Even if you close your eyes
You can't stop falling crystals
Just face it, no need to hide
And let us fly to our skies...

Sun'd rise on the next day
Even if today you failed
Believe,do not hesitate
Remember,I always wait...

Might I be worth enough
To catch your racing heart?
If you bear sorrow deeper than love
Let me ease it with my pure heart...​
 
@sis Cruel: well.... never mind :D, what happened already happened :D, I'm only enjoying the moment now. Hope somebody can drop by the old topic sometimes ^^

Can you write a little piece or 2 for us, please ^^?


@I-K: hey, I found some nice rhythm in yours :x, the last verse is simple but somehow very emotional.

If you bear sorrow deeper than love
Let me ease it with my pure heart...​
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Keep up like this, I believe you have heart for poem I-K :star: :star:



My 2nd:

In Fire and Grief

Darling, I always wish not to hear
The sound of thunder, it brings me tears
The silhouette of the night crowds
What can it be, where are you now?

Send me to hell if you are there
Bring me far away from this despair
Tears never dried on feather bed
With our roses have faded its red

Fire, arise from the lost horizon
So far, yet it's crimson
I don't know why my eyes close
And my heart are about to fall

Wish I were blind, to see no death
Cries from afar, of widow deaf
The bullet shot, to endless void
I heard the fall, of who are close

In fire and grief, darkness and pain
I found your hand, my dearest man

A flower for you, my beloved
Even it can't bring you back to Earth
A wish I save, for heaven to open
Welcome you home, without dinner.
​
 
It looks like logean is too busy for now =))
Well,I think I'll try to make a poem one more time:-*
For now,I have no idea to make a romantic poem a second time ,so I think I'll make another poem
Then It's number zero(One of the Eminem's rap)=))
Number Zero
One,two,three,four....Which number do you like best?
Whatever
With you,Zero is suitable and so great,yes....indeed!
Multiple with million,you're still number zero,zero,zero.....
Your life,your fate,It'll end up like a zero,Is not it so great?

You're proud that you're human
You handle knives to kill person
Carry taser,and you think you're billion?
Oh no!
The god is not insane
Zero is truth,just like oval,billion is just your imagination
Moron!
In life,you just can fear children
In dream,you just can be servant
Oh yeah!
You life is just like a cotton
But why,you think you're iron?
How brilliant!
Fire is in front of,prepare to get burned
But why,you think you're ice dragon?
Earthdragon!
Talking to me with rubbish language
One more sentence,and you'll be fresh meat
In the sandwich!
Shut the fack up,or prepare to get kicked
The nut or the d*ck!
Enjoy the hell life,I'll give you some joss-paper credit
With one tombstone and one coffin fit
Don't worry,I'll take care for your facking sh*t!
Your family,your friends,your facking girl....Oh sh*t!
I'll take and then taste IT!
Hey idiota!
Just remember me
As your daddy
And don't worry
All daddy love their sonny
All daddy....
...Love their sonny​
Well,It took me one afternoon with some coffee to make it
I hope you guy like it,and Joker doesn't ban me again because of this =))
 
Hey idiota!
Just remember me
As your daddy
And don't worry
All daddy love their sonny
All daddy....
...Love their sonny
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Well, quite... romantic ;))

But for me your creation is quite ... different with other "poem" I read, no structure, the meaning ... I can't say that I understand quite well, seem to be about violence and hatred, corruption of men and the world, society ... full of anger and fierce. Over all, it's not my type of "poem" (maybe "rap" is a better and proper words) so I can't give any good critic or comment for it ^^....

My latest creation:


Don't go too far

Can you hear what I say, though a whisper?
Do you really listen to me, my sweet lover?
Can you hear the sound of my heart breaking?
Do you know that I'm not sad, but dying?

Tenderly hold me, do you know that I'm cold?
Day after day, my question is still unsolved
For whom your eyes sparkle, like the stars?
My darling, please stay with me, don't go too far

Remember who stayed with you all night long
When the fire and the light were all gone
Remember how we survived the winter nights
Did you know that I was always by your side?

Was I the one who tasted the bitterness?
Of your tears, my heart was never rested
Was I the one who love so hopelessly?
That day will it come, can I still believe?

My everything, I gave to you with no regret
So please don't ask me to forget, to forsake
Winter will fall to prey on my lonely soul
Through the night, love can no longer grow
​

And I wasn't busy, just waiting ... and hoping...
 
I hate cowardice, I loath myself

Courage

What kind of feeling
Could stop your heart from crying?
And shine o' the everlasting light
Of the white moon tonight

Is it a word that so simple
But beautiful like a marvelous marble
Glows brightly to guide your soul
To a new world where you never fall

So strong the fire within you could feel
Firm like a mountain, for someone you would shield
The others would curse and despite
Brave heart, the sacred sword they can never find

It is time to find the answer
To break down the senseless order
What could be the reason for you to hide?
It made your heart in pain and cried

Courage
A little courage would not kill
Death shall descend if you loose the will
A little sincerity is the remedy
Crying young heart, wake up for destiny​
 
I'm walking to the end ...


Dark Night Of Heaven

To the time of flame, we fall
Destined for this eternal war
From the clouds, we descended
For our fantasy was condemned

We will be bathed in blood
Of our friends and beloved
Born in the dark night of heaven
To witness the end of innocence

This fight can end with all
For the last child's soul was sold
This blades mourn for, long for
The virgin blood, to adore

Children from nowhere, everywhere
Finding their parents, it's not fair
They are in nowhere, everywhere
The wind that carries will not care

Embrace the last burning rose
Everlasting beauty is so close
That we can die for, live for
Thy death kiss, bless once more​
 
My very first tragedy poems (inspired by R&J)

Fantasy Tragedy

A cold night of fantasy
Asleep into my tragedy
In our choking life story
Embrace your last breath and me

Poison bring us to paradise
Torn apart but never die
Storm and darkness are behind
Finally we saw the light

“Candles light and deadly venom
The letter baptized in blood
A smile on their face
Is this what they were wishing for so long
The eternity”

Let they mourn their threnody
We obsessed that melody
Tears have fallen for memory
“Farewell and be free”

Hold my hand once again
Under the moonlight we dance
Forever our pain had ended
Sing and dance until the end

“In that night two were gone
As it was written in this poem
They were one soul in two body
Their death didn’t mean tragedy
For what they call it’s fantasy
Forever it will remain in my memory"
​
 
Today is somewhat short :D


Lost Star

Let me walk through the winter
To feel its delicate whisper
Let me stain the virgin snow
By my tears and filthy soul

Let me stand in solitude tonight
To find the lost star on the sky
Let me cry all alone
By your grave, my love still goes on​
 
Sorry for can't help you more than in other day,logean.I was too busy-_-"
logean nói:
But for me your creation is quite ... different with other "poem" I read, no structure, the meaning ... I can't say that I understand quite well, seem to be about violence and hatred, corruption of men and the world, society ... full of anger and fierce. Over all, it's not my type of "poem" (maybe "rap" is a better and proper words) so I can't give any good critic or comment for it ^^....
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Ops:-s....Well,I thought I was making a "free poem":-s....Well,It can be rap somehow:-s...It is more funnier that just violence and hatred,I thought^^...
Well,I have made one poem this morning^^.And I can't think what title will be^^?

Forgetting about the past,leaving it as it is
Buring the fear that haunted the kid inside me
A new horizon is awaiting for us-vast and bright
Wiping tear,standing up like a men should be

Now,show our true color in our life
No matter what kind.It's fine
Even if someone think it's so dark
We know,our soul is so bright

Carefree,light as feather
Live freely,just keep our deeper
No matter what we do look like
Depend not on anything.Let us fly higher

Thanks god,he'll not help when we're hungry
Because,he gave us a rod when we're lazy
He might not give you many friends and lot of party
But he'd give you best friend and longest spree

If you think you're poor.Just change your mind
We're lucky to have our own life
If you whine your life is too depent,you hypocrite.
Stand up yourself,and change your life style

Thank to world,It might give you a bad thing's kind
Thank to god,It might not give you a good life
But they have given you enough talent and vitality
For yourlife,to live on your own.Does it sound unfair,guy?​

Actually,today I'm broke =)).....I paid about 500.000 VND yesterday=))
 
Poetry is art and entertainment for us, so we can only write it when we truly have time and feel relaxed, it's really hard to force ourselves to write u know, we have to diverse time for another things, just ... when the time is right, we can write a decent piece in that time ^^
I'm just happy that there's one person like to write poem too, it's a real joy for me already and thanks for bringing me that joy ^^.


My comment:
Unexpectedly, your poem brighten up my day :x, ok it's somehow messy at the last stanza but this verse is so SIMPLE but DEEP INDEED !

If you think you're poor.Just change your mind
We're lucky to have our own life
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Somehow I don't recommend you use the "dot" in the middle of your sentence, it cut the flow

Depend not on anything.Let us fly higher
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try the comma or write it straight, I think it will be easier to ... feel ^^

If I were you, I would not let another person to name my children but by myself :D
 
For who had ever lost their friend


Without you

For the last time, I had you close
But it's too late, this night still fall
Give me your hand, my friend
Its warmth can drift away this pain

I used to live without suffer
Now this way is getting darker
I don't know what it can be
I only wished you can be here with me

Forgive me, for all the fights
I didn't know what was in my mind
Now I feel my heart is running slower
I apologize, how can I wait later

Don't you see, I'm losing both
My friend and the one I love most
Who want to win this fight of pain
Is still alone in this bitter end

Friend, help me to stop these tears
Can see you no more, it's my fear
Friend, can you hear the echo around
Our wind mill's racked sound

Please stay with me a little bit longer
Before I wander to white land forever
Without you​
 
Thanks for your comment,logean^^.Well,in other day,I don't have any idea or time to make a completing poem.Just a little,little bit...
Ah yes,today is ,somehow, short....

Well,sorry,logean,yesterday I'm little tired.I though I'll post It completely when I've completed
 
Ok, I will be waiting until it complete, however I do think you should check the grammars.
 
Where the hell is the poem topic we had :-/
This one is from Crisis Core (for who doesn't know about it, plz google >.>)
I just read them yesterday and find it interesting ^^

Loveless - Prologue
When the war of the beasts brings about the world’s end
The goddess descends from the sky

Wings of light and dark spreads afar
She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting

Loveless Act I
The gift of the goddess is what the three men seek
But their fates are scattered by war

One becomes a hero, one wanders the land
And the last is taken prisoner

But the three are still bound by a solemn oath
To seek the answer together, once again

Loveless Act II
Though the prisoner escapes, he is gravely wounded
His life is saved, however
By a woman of the opposing nation

He begins a life of a seclusion with her
Which seems to hold the promise of eternal bliss

But as happiness grows, so does guilt
Of not fulfilling the oath to his friends

Loveless Act III
As the war sends the world hurtling towards destruction
The prisoner departs with his newfound love
And embarks on a new journey

He is guided by hope that the gift will bring bliss
And the oath that he swore to his friends

Though no oath is shared between the lovers
In their hearts they know they will meet again

Loveless - Act IV
My friend, the fates are cruel
There are no dreams, no honor remains

The arrow has left the bow of the goddess
My soul, corrupted by vengeance

Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey
In my own salvation and your eternal slumber

Legend shall speak of sacrifice at world’s end
The wind sails over the water’s surface quietly, but surely

Loveless - Act V -Made by Genesis-
Even if the morrow is barren of promises
Nothing shall forestall my return

To become the dew that quenches the land
To spare the sands, the seas, the skies
I offer thee this silent sacrifice​
 
Resurrecting (for short term I guess...)

Star

Through your velvet curtain
Baptized in my light, so yearn
I am here, a stand of light
In your darkness I will shine
Don't you come, but I am here
Forever I am always near
These lonesome, tiring days
Wish I had been astray, far away
Until you're gone, and be with me
I'm always here for you to see
So light my soul with your beauty
Then love won't be my misery...​
 
Listlessly,
bereft of Hope,
he kicks through the days.
An insignificant being’s reverie -
large enough to embrace the whole universe
but,
is nothing more than a “wicked” conserve.
Warped and drown
by the deranged mega-structure – flippantly persecuted.



Day by day, then
month by month, and then
year by year, scorned by the rest,
forlornly, fearfully, life is ferocious.
Yet he is there, being aware.
“One day, they will pay.”
When
Everything
turns to dust;
the structure explodes;
the splendid gem sublimates
None remains but despondency. Then,
may Hope be born, within the darkest despair.

i wrote this a long time ago, these are 2 verses of the 5 i wrote in my english class but i couldn't find the other 3 files anywhere.
well, it was a few years ago and i was silly, but looking at these lines sure brought back some memories of my earlier days.
 
*skips anything longer than 3 lines*
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